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Capturing the smallest details of times gone by

1/26/2017

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A meme crossed my Facebook feed recently in which participants posted examples of concepts from their childhoods that would be foreign to a child today. “The milkman leaving glass bottles full of milk at our backdoor,” wrote one. “Picking up the phone to make a call and having to wait for a neighbor to finish her conversation on our party line,” said an older commenter. “Racing home from school to watch TV and then put dinner in the oven before my parents got home from work—two things no kids would do today,” said another, a bit more wryly.

The phone was the source of my example as well, though from a time not as far back as party lines: “Calling a friend and being expected to make polite small talk with her mother or father before they’d put her on the line.” I watch my own kids call or text directly to their friends’ private phones and silently bemoan the fact that they’ll never have to practice the basic courtesy of chatting on the phone with random adults.

Some examples of bygone circumstances that our elders remember reach the rank of cliché: the familiar “walking ten miles barefoot through the snow to school, uphill both ways” is the obvious one. But others are subtler and more elusive. Examples come up all the time when I’m working with my memoir clients – and they aren’t necessarily the ones you’d think of first. Yes, some of my clients in their eighties and nineties remember war rationing, missing school to help with the harvest, hearing the news that a friend had polio. But sometimes examples arise in their narrative that I have to remind my clients will be interesting and novel to their grandchildren. In a project I’m working on now, a client told of arriving at a resort in Tahiti in the midst of a three-week vacation to find a letter from her father awaiting her. Though my client was more focused on describing the beaches and villages of Tahiti, I reminded her that for the benefit of her fourteen-year-old granddaughter, the excitement of arriving somewhere far away and finding a letter awaiting you merited some explanation. Now, communications from friends and family ping in on our cellphones at any time and any place, I reminded her, but before cellphones – only just over twenty years ago or so – it was still common to leave an itinerary with folks at home when you traveled, hoping they would take the time to write you a letter and figure out when to mail it by so that it would reach you at your destination.

Another client described a family vacation in the mid-1940s on which the African-American nanny wasn’t allowed to join the family in the hotel dining room because they were visiting a segregated southern city – something we can only hope would be so foreign to our children now as to require explanation. Even stories about playing in the woods with friends, unsupervised for hours on end, might have an exotic ring to a child now in grade school – or the description one client gave of visiting her fiancé at college and bunking in a professor’s family’s guest room for the sake of propriety.
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These are the most interesting aspects of our memoirs, I often remind my clients. Not just the most dramatic images: the heart-stopping moments of military warfare or the long overseas journeys by boat before airline travel was available. The moments as small as calling a friend on the house phone and chatting with her parents. The moments that simply don’t happen anymore: these are what we preserve when we write our memoirs.

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Marjorie Turner Hollman
1/27/2017 01:55:03 pm

Wonderful post, Nancy--yes, it's the small details that make a story, that make a life.

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Kit Dwyer
1/30/2017 09:14:13 am

I really enjoyed this post, Nancy! I find I am still friends with parents of many of my school-age friends due to that old customary practice of small talk with the parents first, on the phone and in person. The unsupervised play is a familiar and joyful part of many memoir stories. And I'll also throw in the spankings! (some humorous, some not) Young readers will indeed find these things extraordinary, when highlighted in the way you describe.

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Dawn Szabo link
2/1/2017 09:09:41 am

This was beautifully written Nancy and a reminder to us all to add depth to our life stories by sharing the smaller details.

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MaryPena link
12/24/2020 05:11:59 pm

Greatt share

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Mold Removal Canton link
8/20/2022 09:06:07 pm

Greaat reading this

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